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[Pokemon G/S Lance Battle Final]

Pretty Epic

But as the song went on, the attack on the guitar seemed to soften up a little bit.

Burn7 responds:

Hm, that's not one I've heard before. But Listening to it again, I have to agree. Here's the remastered version, maybe that'll fix it: http://www.mediafire.com/?2zrnkpphz3b r3ik

[DJB345T - Hardcore]

Pretty good

But the fade out was kinda dissappointing.

As for the rest of the track (besides how short it was) was pretty well done. I have to say that I was expecting more updraft/upbeat on the eighths/upbeat, and on the big drum after it kicked in.

Also, an idea for during the fills when/if you do a longer version, is use the opening riff and bleeps in quiet parts.

This would be both an amazing Jumping song and a Shuffling song, depending on how you might tweak it.

Is also a little bit TOO dirty, but that's just tase. Overall, pretty kickass.

8/10, 4/5

Matchu1991 responds:

Thank you so much for the review. I have already made a longer more awesome version of this called DJB345T - HARDCORE[Extend] check it out and see what you think of that one.

[[MC] Every Time We Touch [Rmx]]

Pretty Good

Its a very catchy remix. But, the buzzy topping is really kind of annoying. XD

You should turn the main mix down a bit so it doesn't top out like that, and probably see if you can't take the brightness down a notch on your distortion as well.

MmmCake responds:

awesome, thanks!
yeah, ill try out those ideas ty :D

[Welcome to the Club MixPreview]

Amazing!

If you ever release this elsewhere, tell me where I can buy it!

I like the beginning piano-y style merging with the dance music. Pretty catchy. You could reach charts with this!

It does sound a lot like Basshunter (the upbeat bassline and the upbeat saw-like riffs at ~1:00)

10/10 5/5

ioneofmany responds:

Thanks for the review man! :) Basshunter has been a huge influence in my music making. If you think about it, there aren't actually that many artists that make their music in a similar style in the techno realm. hehe

[Lost thoughts]

Well,

Its obvious you've been using Garageband.^^ It sounds really good, but since its not really 'your' music, I'm giving you a 6/10 3/5.

Don't get me wrong, it does sound really nice and balanced, but you should at least put in the authors comments that its just a mash of a whole bunch of sample riffs and scores from Garageband 2/3.

Zake1 responds:

Yeah, this song was all samples except the bass line. But my later submissions will be all original loops. I was just testing it out on new grounds and working on my skills, thanks.