This is pretty good.
Some reverse bass would sound really good with this.
But as the song went on, the attack on the guitar seemed to soften up a little bit.
Hm, that's not one I've heard before. But Listening to it again, I have to agree. Here's the remastered version, maybe that'll fix it: http://www.mediafire.com/?2zrnkpphz3b r3ik
Okay; some parts out of sync
Reminds me a lot of Basshunters stuff right after he started getting popular, and right before he became a franchized douchebag who writes American music.
At 0:33, 1:30, 1:34 and several other small parts, the vocals are slightly out of sync with the music; just need to tighten up the screws and resync it and it'll be great.
Although, I don't really like the way the bass sounds, and glide on the harmonica thing is up a little notch too high.
Other than that, it sounds pretty good.
But the fade out was kinda dissappointing.
As for the rest of the track (besides how short it was) was pretty well done. I have to say that I was expecting more updraft/upbeat on the eighths/upbeat, and on the big drum after it kicked in.
Also, an idea for during the fills when/if you do a longer version, is use the opening riff and bleeps in quiet parts.
This would be both an amazing Jumping song and a Shuffling song, depending on how you might tweak it.
Is also a little bit TOO dirty, but that's just tase. Overall, pretty kickass.
Thank you so much for the review. I have already made a longer more awesome version of this called DJB345T - HARDCORE[Extend] check it out and see what you think of that one.
Its a very catchy remix. But, the buzzy topping is really kind of annoying. XD
You should turn the main mix down a bit so it doesn't top out like that, and probably see if you can't take the brightness down a notch on your distortion as well.
yeah, ill try out those ideas ty :D
If you ever release this elsewhere, tell me where I can buy it!
I like the beginning piano-y style merging with the dance music. Pretty catchy. You could reach charts with this!
It does sound a lot like Basshunter (the upbeat bassline and the upbeat saw-like riffs at ~1:00)
Thanks for the review man! :) Basshunter has been a huge influence in my music making. If you think about it, there aren't actually that many artists that make their music in a similar style in the techno realm. hehe
Its obvious you've been using Garageband.^^ It sounds really good, but since its not really 'your' music, I'm giving you a 6/10 3/5.
Don't get me wrong, it does sound really nice and balanced, but you should at least put in the authors comments that its just a mash of a whole bunch of sample riffs and scores from Garageband 2/3.
Yeah, this song was all samples except the bass line. But my later submissions will be all original loops. I was just testing it out on new grounds and working on my skills, thanks.
Although, when it came to 0:32, I though there would be some sort of BOOM kinda thing going on, like a climax, because it seemed like it was building energy to that point for some sort of impressive sounding crash or thump or whatever, but it kinda disappointed me... =[
Very good though, like the sound of it! Nice combinations.
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